Gig,
It would take some adjusting at this point, but considering that she's a killer, it might help here to have the sword in her left-hand be more prominently seen in some way, just to help in emphasizing that aspect of her character.
Also, maybe having a few hints of the blood she's just spilled spattered along areas of her leg would be cool/sexy(?), although that might mean changing the color of her beautiful tattoo.
Thanks for showing your step-by-steps. Your sketches are really nice, and I really like those funny "emote-characters" in your 3D-gallery.
