[~Maximiliaan]

I finaly have my new tablet so time to start a new painting. This is what I have atm. Nothing really special, but hopefully that will come sooner or later.
All critics are appreciated!!

[Avery]

Looks good so far! I really like the arm-- the anatomy on that looks pretty well done, though I'd suggest a little more work on the shoulder. The hip also looks both a little too high and a little too narrow. I like the hoprizontel composition, but bringing her down until she rests below the center line will strengthen it. Solid beginning, though!

[mokad]

nice so far! what kind of tablet did you get?

for the mostpart i agree with Avery about lowering the subject to strengthen the composition.

the colours seem a bit saturated, but perhaps it's just an early step, so we'll have to see an update soon :P

[~Maximiliaan]

thanks for the advice guys, it really helped :D
heres a new update.

[subversive-imaginati]

It has some anatomy issues, her skull is overlong, if we're supposed to be seeing that much of the top of it? We shouldn't see that much of her face. If we're supposed to be seeing that much of her face reduce the amount of skull she has because her brain is nearly as big as her face it seems.

Also her arm is huge compared to her body, if she stood up her elbow would be level with her hip. The elbow should be level with the bottom of the ribcage. I'd suggest either lengthening the body or shrinking the arm, the body could do with being longer either way since she's lacking a bit in the waist department as well.

Are you using reference? If not, you really should get some.

It's got some potential already, but with work it could be even better.

[~Maximiliaan]

Thanks sub, I've shortend the arm a bit, but I really dont have a clue how to paint the hair XD